Tomare peyechi jiivaneri prate: Difference between revisions

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Has fallen withered from neglect.
Has fallen withered from neglect.
The love that I have offered You
The love that I have offered You
Will all be finished, all be lost—
Will all be finished, all be lost–
All be lost on a barren course.
All be lost on a barren course.


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I have lain asleep, been neglectful.
I have lain asleep, been neglectful.
The songs that I have offered You
The songs that I have offered You
Will all be finished, all unsung—
Will all be finished, all unsung–
Unsung in the realm beyond speech.
Unsung in the realm beyond speech.
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