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 Your arrival path—
 I am watching that.
-You have not heard my story;
+You haven't heard my story;
-Here You still have not reached.
+Here, You didn't yet reach.
 Today, my heart
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 In isolation, I kiss the air.
-And yet, that fragrance spreads out across the blue sky.
+My fragrance floats
-To the agony of a withered pollen, do you not listen?
+Around the world, across the sky.
+The travails of my fallen pollen—
+Will You not hear that tale, oh Lord?
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