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 Having recognized You, I still don't know You;
-Remaining close, You play hide-and-seek.
+Remaining close, You play peekaboo.
-Having touched You, I cannot hold on to You,
+Having held You, I cannot hang on to You,
-Ever sporting and yet pristine.
+Ever sporting but pristine.
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