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 | <poem>
 You let Yourself be held
-By this my heart.
+Within this my heart;
-You filled with hope my heart,
+You infused hope
-Which was an abode of despair.
+Into despair's abode.
-What was covered in darkness
+What was once covered in darkness,
-Is now encompassed by light.
+It's become glazed with effulgence;
-So why do You still bind me
+So why have You still bound me
-In finite identity?
+With a finite identity?
-What was covered in petals
+What was once concealed by petals,
-Is sweetly encompassed by love.
+That nectar's now smeared with love;
-So what part remains unrealized
+So what is still remaining
-In this transmutation of consciousness?
+In my consciousness exchanging?
 </poem>
 |}