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 What was covered in darkness
-Is now enveloped with light.
+Is now encompassed by light.
 So why do You still bind me
 With finite identity?
-That which was covered by petals,
+What was covered in petals
-That honey was full of love.
+Is now encompassed by sweet love.
-Then what else still remains
+So what part remains unrealized
-In this exchange of consciousness?
+With this transmutation of consciousness?
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