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 Filling the tongue.
-To all I gave a palm of water,{{#tag:ref|''Jaláiṋjali'' is the ceremonial offering of a handful (or both hands full) of water to the deceased. In a figurative sense this line might symbolize a total detachment from the world (mind turned to God).|group="nb"}}
+To all I did give a palm of water,{{#tag:ref|''Jaláiṋjali'' is the ceremonial offering of a handful (or both hands full) of water to the deceased. In a figurative sense this line might symbolize a total detachment from the world (mind turned to God).|group="nb"}}
-Charming with love, a tray offered in worship...
+With love charming, a tray offered in worship...
 Sweetness of mind I lavish,
-This time please do come.
+This time don't You come?
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