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-My avid mind acknowledges no barriers;
+My restless mind heeds no impediment;
-It only wants to go toward Him.
+It only wants to go toward Him...
-Why oh why such a desire?
+Why do I have this wish?
-Pollen blanketing the earth, chirping in the bower,
+Earth's pollen and the chirps in a shady retreat,
-The days of honey gone by—
+Forsaken are even they, those my days of honey;
-With all the sweetness in my mind,
+With them all combined, the sweetness of my psyche,
-Still I lose myself in Him.
+It still faints within Him only.
-There were so many words, so many thoughts,
+Whatever may be the history, all respect received
-So many unvoiced wounds to my pride—
+And any unvoiced wounds to my prestige;
-Today, with all that blending together,
+Now, into one they all are melding...
-Why do I still rush toward Him?
+Why do they race toward Him only?
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