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 On a rainy night You came
 In the garden of tuberoses.
-I felt my pride wounded—
+I was in a huff.
-So the house was bolted,
+House bolted,
-And I stayed in a tiny corner.
+I bode in a tiny nook.
 Storm after storm came.
 Blow after blow was felt.
 Still, throughout the night, You kept awake
-For the music concert.
+At the music concert.
 Torrential rains came pouring down,
 Gust after gust was felt.
-Yet, throughout the night, You kept awake,
+Yet, throughout the night, You kept awake
-For the sweet love chorus.
+In a sweet love chorus.
-In the stormy night You came,
+For a stormy night you came
 In the garden of tuberoses.
-Unmindfully, I sat in my small, closed room.
+I was unaware—
-Only the tuberoses knew You had come.
+House bolted,
+Only the tuberoses knew.
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