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 On the day we wed, with the dawn's sunrays,
-Inside my mind, darkness no longer remained.
+Inside my mind, darkness no longer stayed.
 With the fragrance of flowers and sweet smile of life,
 Everything painful was swept aside.
 Countless past lives have come to fruition;
-Requited was every good and bad action.
+Requited were all good and bad actions.
-In a split second everything drifts away;
+In a split second where does it drift away;
 All was forgotten when become Yours have I.
-You exist, whereas I merely persist;
+You exist, whereas I just persist;
 In every exchange, it is You I've obtained.
 By Your grace, attachments are erased;