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 | <poem>
 You thrilled the globe with a dance beat;
-You set us afloat in music's melody.
+You set afloat on music's melody.
-In a mind-grove at edge of psyche,
+In mental grove at edge of psyche,
-You put in motion a quivering.
+You dispatched a quivering.
-Come still closer in touch with earth,
+Oh come still closer within reach,
-Once You've burnished its form and color.
+When You brightened with hue and beauty.
-Unseen and unstained You ever remain,
+Ever You remain unseen and unstained;
-But You poured sweetness inside of me.
+Sweetness You did pour inside of me.
 </poem>
 |}