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 Under the pleasant shade of sweetness?
-In my song, there is no prayer;
+My song, it is not a prayer;
-In my smile, just acquisition.
+My smile, is it just acquisition?
-My every movement, each expression,
+My all movement, every implication,
-Having plied a stream of sweet grace,
+Having plied a river of sweet grace,
-Proceeds, gazing at the target of effulgence.
+Proceeds, gazing at the goal of effulgence.
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