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-In any low thought I will not allow my mind to fall.
+I will not let my mind be soiled by any mean action.
-No, no, no, I won't do petty, selfish, small things.
+No, no, no, I won't allow anything mean.
-I will seat my mind in the effulgence of meditation,
+Seating my mind in the effulgence of meditation,
-I will create a new world.
+I will construct a new world.
-This world and the celestial realms are waiting for me
+Earth and heaven await me
-In breathless expectation.
+With bated breath and ardent longing.
 I will fulfill their hopes.
-I will cause the stream of life to flow.
+I will let loose the fountain of life.
 Removing tears, I will bring smiles.
-Crying will cease and flutes will play.
+Crying will go away; flutes will play.
-On this earth will descend auspicious days.
+To this earth, prosperity will come.
-Sorrows and pains will torment no more.
+There'll be no tales about misery and oppression of anyone.
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