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 Blood is surging in the cadence of action.
 In all directions the sweetness of my mind—
-It has gone racing toward infinity,
+It went racing toward infinity,
-It's gone, gone, gone.
+It went, went, went.
-The flower of my heart and the flame of my mind
+In the flower of my heart and the flame of my life,
-He took away my all,
+There, He took my everything.
-My all, my all, my all.
+He took, took, took.
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