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-What was Yours, Lord, I consign to You.
+Your creature I am consigning to You.
-Please take her/him on Your lap.
+Lord, receive Your own onto Your lap.
-With tears, I have bestowed her/him,
-With pangs of loss.
+Tearfully, I am consigning; mournfully, I am enduring—
-My only consolation is
+My only solace is that You accept Your own.
-That you have accepted her/him.
-All those who came survive.
+Everyone who has come is remaining—
-In infinity everyone exists.
+In the infinite they exist even now.
-But we still live in fear of loss.
+Nevertheless we feel bereaved, bereaved;
-O Lord, forgetting you, we worry and weep.
+Forgetting how great You are, we worry and weep.
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