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-Who came without saying You came?
+You came without notice—
-To break deep sleep You gave a clarion call.
+To break our deep sleep, You gave a clarion call.
-In wayward winds made gracious,
+Gliding on wayward winds,
-The song of total attainment You sang.
+You sang the song of total attainment.
 In the sky is the sun; underfoot is the earth;
 Sounding are the horns; bustling are the roads.
-I remained asleep, wasting urgent time—
+We were asleep, losing urgent time—
-You shook off my negligent lethargy.
+You shook off our negligent lethargy.
-Dancing and singing in rhythm,
+Toward the stream of effulgence,
-Moving forward on the path
+In rhythm, you danced and sang.
-Toward the stream of radiant light
+You ascended the path of progress—
-Sending out Your call to rouse me from slumber.
+You climbed the path; You gave a clarion call.
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