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 | <poem>
 March on, march on— singing songs, march on.
-The lustrous flame of hope is extremely bright.
+The lustrous flame of hope is exceedingly bright.
-Making the world virtually a liberated zone,
+Making the world a virtual liberated zone,
 March on from house to house— singing songs, march on.
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 We protect those who are weak.
-All languages, all doctrines, all paths, we respect.
+Whatever language, whatever creed— whatever path there be;
-The flame of love is burning brightly.
+In our reverence for all we do not falter.
 </poem>
 |}