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-You have come,
+You have come— You have come into my life.
-You have come into my life.
+Illuminating the world, You have come into my life.
-Filling this universe with resplendent light,
-You have come into my life.
+The sound of your ankle bells penetrated the heart of my heart
-The sound of your ankle bells
-Entered the core of my mind
 And made me forget all my pain.
-You are with me now
-Remain forever with me.
+You are with me now— please stay with me.
-In the lingering thrill of bliss,
+Thrilling me with sweet tremors of bliss, stay with me.
-Remain with me.
+Your sweet smile has made my heart overflowing
-Your sweet smile has made my heart overflow
+And divested me of everything else.
-And has taken away my all.
 </poem>
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