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 I will paint, paint with sympathetic sweetness.
-I move and move in Your rhythm,
+Today, I go forward in Your rhythm;
-Scenting myself with Your divine fragrance,
+I am redolent with Your fragrance.
-Going forward in laughter and joy.
+Laughing, I stroll with joy,
-With palash blossoms, I colour the path crimson,
+Coloring the path red with [[wikipedia:Butea_monosperma|kinshuk flowers]],
-For You only, Lord of my innermost heart.
+For You, my intimate companion.
 Today, no obstacles obstruct the path.
 Into Your garland my heart is woven.