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 For You, my intimate companion.
-Today, no obstacles obstruct the path.
+Today, there is no hindrance to progress.
-Into Your garland my heart is woven.
+My heart is threaded into Your garland;
-With Your melody my song resonates.
+My song is concordant with Your melody.
-Today, in the cuckoo's sweet call,
+Today, in the sweet notes of the cuckoo's call, my all—
-My whole mind floats along.
+It flows toward the One
-And to the One toward whom it drifts,
+To Whom homage is offered.
-I offer my deepest salutation.
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