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 You stood by the wayside.
-My eyes were half-closed in sleep.
+In sleep, my eyes are muddled.
-Some things I saw, but some I could not.
+Some things I see; some things I see not.
-Wet with the mist of night's end,
+So, at night's end, damp from the dew,
-You left at dawn, fading into the void.
+You left at dawn, fading into formless.
 The jasmine creeper at my door