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-Come into my mind; sit inside my mind.
+Enter my mind; sit in my mind.
-Oh Lord, say something within my mind.
+Oh Lord, say something in my mind.
 Oh my most intimate Lord,
-Come in my realization, come in my meditation.
+Enter my realization, enter my meditation.
-Infatuation with sweet, blemishless beauty,
+Infatuation with sweet and flawless beauty,
-Entrapment in a realm of alluring dreams,
+Ensnarement in the realm of alluring dreams,
-Heart-elation with floral fragrance—
+Intoxication with floral fragrance—
 Come, put an end to my yearning.
-With ever more songs, rhythms and resonances.
+With more and more songs in more rhythms and melodies.
-Come, Lord into every corner of my mind.
+Enter, Lord, into every corner of my mind.
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