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In the magnolia grove I have mislaid | |||
My incomplete poem. | My incomplete poem. | ||
To the sweet aroma I concede defeat. | |||
Seeking not within, I moved about without— | Seeking not within, I moved about without— | ||
I did not heed Your message. | I did not heed Your message. | ||
Now all pains embedded in | Now all pains embedded in heart's core, | ||
All | All secrets— they have vanished. | ||
Whose fragrance wrought this transformation. | Whose fragrance wrought this transformation. | ||
I cannot fathom. | I cannot fathom. |