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 The lost tunes of my early life,
 The songs still reside in my heart.
-Full of color and grace, enveloped by modesty,
+Full of color and grace but ringed by modesty,
-How may such a song be sung in public.
+How may I sing in public.
-O Brother, remove this shyness,
+Oh my caring friend
-allow the bud of my mind to bloom.
+Oh my caring friend, carry me beyond shame;
-By Your divine sport and illusory action,
+Today, let the flowers of my mind blossom.
-make it bloom charmingly and beautifully.
+By Your divine sport, by Your divine magic,
+Everything blooms with sweet beauty.
 The bud of my mind is covered with leaves.