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 Everything blooms with sweet beauty.
-The bud of my mind is covered with leaves.
+Covered with leaves were the buds of my mind;
-It tries to peep out through the gaps between these leaves.
+They were peeking through gaps between the leaves.
-Today, forgetting all shyness and fears, I move forward!
+Today, ignoring shyness and fear, I proceed
-I move ahead,
+From the world of form to the formless through meditation.
-from the colorful earth,
-towards the realm of formlessness.
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