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Verse 3 and some refinements - translation complete

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 Ego-free, I ever sing;
 To Your tunes, the flute sounds—
-Your flute sounds, Lord; Your flute sounds.
+The flute sounds, Lord; the flute sounds.
-I keep on singing songs to the tune of your flute.
+With the jingling ring of Your ankle bells
-The jingling sound of your ankle bells has filled my mind.
+My mind has become overflowing—
+Overflowing, Lord, overflowing.
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