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Verse 3 and some refinements - translation complete

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 At darkest night You came,
 Bearing the splendor of effulgence.
-In my desert heart You made a sweet,
+In my desert heart You made a delightful,
 Cooling stream flow.
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 You washed them away.
-A tremor went through the sky and through the earth.
+Then a tremor rose through earth and sky;
-It stirred the rhythm of everyone's heart.
+In every heart was that drive.
-You dissolved my entire ego
+All my ego mingled with dust,
-and shed drops of nectar on me.
+Generating motes of ambrosia.
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