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 Your game consists of pleasure and pain—
 So much respect, so much neglect.
-For eternity, Your liila—
+Your liila, eternally—
 Where it leads, please let me see.
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 My sincerity You do not perceive.
-Now, my time just drifts away.
+Meanwhile, Lord, where goes the time?
-Today, i am alone, lost in darkness.
+Today, I stand alone in the dark.
-Piercing the bosom of a dark night,
+Piercing the heart of darkness,
-Radiate a colorful effulgence upon me.
+Let loose the splendor of light.
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