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 Before my eyes, Lord, before my eyes.
 On a gentle breeze with floral fragrance,
-Stately fell Your feet,
+Stately fell Your divine feet,
-Your feet, Lord, Your feet.
+Your divine feet, Lord, Your divine feet.
 Though I had nothing, still You came;
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 In mad vanity regarding qualities Thine,
 I had cast Thee far from me.
-Today, in my penury, Thou hast come once more
+Today, in my penury, Thou hast come once more,
 On the plea of a tear-drenched heart,
-On my plea, Lord, on my plea.
+My humble plea, Lord, my humble plea.
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