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 On His effulgence the cosmos sails;
 With His light everyone sparkles.
-Can He be known or understood—
+To know or understand Him—
-Does anyone have such intellect?
+No one has such intellect.
 On His inspiration, everyone races;
-With His impulse, all come alive.
+At His impulse, all come alive.
-Inside the mind, invitingly adorned—
+With Him inside the mind, invitingly attired—
-Everybody inevitably yearns only for Him.
+It's impossible to yearn for anything else.
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