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 Come, please come, my abiding friend;
 It's been ages, years and years.
-How this neglect happened,
+How this neglect happened
-And why... please tell me.
+And why it was... tell me.
-How many days have come and gone—
+How many days have come and gone,
-Notes lost in many a song.
+Notes lost in countless songs.
-After so very long, Your grace befell;
+After such a long time, You've taken pity;
-With stream of nectar, blessings trickle.
+With stream of nectar, blessings now trickle.
-So many seasoncycles came and went
+How many have been the cycles of seasons,
-with the rise and fall of life's flow.
+Ebbs and flows in the current of existence.
-So many arrivals and departures
+Advents and exits of so many things
-have i had to witness.
+Came to pass all around me.
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