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-In every mind You have made an abode;
+In every mind You made Your abode;
 Your place is in every home.
 You are the passion of every heart;
 Other than You there is nothing more.
-I am a tiny candle flame;
+We are but a tiny candle flame;
-I get my fire only from You.
+We get our fire only from You.
-My candlelight is just Your blaze;
+Our candlelight is just Your blaze;
-I carry on my brow its soot.{{#tag:ref|This could signify the impurities that attach to us. Alternately, in some Hindu traditions, a black [[:wikipedia:Tilak|''tilak'']] or [[:wikipedia:Bindi (decoration)|''bindi'']] signifies purification and the warding off of evil.|group="nb"}}
+We carry on our brow its soot.{{#tag:ref|This could signify the impurities that attach to us. Alternately, in some Hindu traditions, a black [[:wikipedia:Tilak|''tilak'']] or [[:wikipedia:Bindi (decoration)|''bindi'']] signifies purification and the warding off of evil.|group="nb"}}
 You exist, so all exist;
-I find You in the public midst.
+We find You in the public midst.
 Tenderness and affection, love and compassion,
-Knowledge and comprehension... all that I attain,
+Knowledge and comprehension... all that we attain,
 By Your grace, everything occurs...
-Under Your umbrage, I make headway.
+Under Your umbrage, we make headway.
-Into the core of my heart, come regally;
+Into our heart of hearts, come regally;
-I want to hold You near.
+We want to hold You near.
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