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 And Your rainbow colors, everything is glazed.
-From the far side of a dark, dark fog,
+Krsna, from the far side of a dark, dark fog,
 Your light sparkles, Your nectar pours forth.
 How novel and amazing is Your divine sport
 To paint pictures in [[:wikipedia:Chiaroscuro|chiaroscuro]].
-yet, from far beyond your veil of seclusion and silence,
+On the shore of silent serenity,
-Your resonant melody rings out to us, again and again.
+A clarion tune resounds repetitively.
-The wheels of your chariot move with that melody,
+World obliviating, mind intoxicating,
-regaling the hearts and intoxicating the minds of all.
+On that melody traverse Your chariot wheels.
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