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 Tears have moistened
 The garland that was woven.
-My sun has set; evening has fallen.
+My sun has set and evening fallen;
 In the mind get lost my words unspoken.
-Saying He would return, He went away.
+Saying He would return, my Love went away;
-Many years have passed; still my Love has not come back.
+Though ages have passed, He has not come back.
-Sleep has arrived, my night descended.
+Sleep has arrived, my night descended;
-Is it that He did not sense my pain?
+Could it be He did not sense my pain?
-Those who come, come to leave again.
+Those who come, they come to leave;
-Those who go, go with the promise to return.
+Those who leave go saying they'll return.
-My friend is hidden everywhere,
+Hidden is my Love everywhere and forever;
-in all ages and in all lands.
+Every single word His ears do hear.
-In all words he hears everything.
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