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 The layers of atmosphere get lighter,
-And steadily the clouds grow thinner.
+And steadily the clouds grow thinner;
-The fairy, she goes on flying;
+But the fairy goes on flying.
 Faster and faster, she hies.
-She crosses the boundaries of fairy land.
+As she crosses the fairyland border,
-The stars glitter more brightly here,
+The stars, they twinkle much more.
-and the moon it smiles more than before.
+The moon, it shines more brightly;
-The fairy will dedicate this flower to her god.
+The fairy will offer the flower to her deity.
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