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Verse 3 and some refinements - translation complete

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 Within my mind You had come
 To scatter fragrance of nameless blossoms.
-Within my life You had arisen
+Within my heart You had arisen
-To emanate tunes of limitless songs.
+To emanate tunes of freedom songs.
 Abounding on all sides of my footpath
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 To proceed in carefree dance.
-The world of ideation
+Abounding on all sides of my thought path,
-flashes promises
+Are harp strings and lost melodies.
-of melodies unrevealed,
+With what tune have You pleased my mind?
-strings of lyres unplayed.
+Its name You do not tell.
+Today, that song, it heartens me
-With what mysterious melody
+To cover my footpath with hope.
-have you enchanted me.
-Its resonance, still fresh
-inundates my mind and
-fills me with inspiration on my forward path.
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