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 Since time immemorial, I know You are a wayfarer;
-So I beg You to break journey for a while.
+So I beg You to pause for a while.
-Should You choose to stay, then bear in mind
+Should You choose to stay, then rest assured
 In my heart I've reserved a seat for Thee.
 With Your touch upon my heart,
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 Since time immemorial, You are a singer;{{#tag:ref|To be precise, an ''udgátá'' is a singer of the ''Sámaveda'', which according to Sarkar is a compilation of the musical portions of the three vedas: Rgveda, Yajurveda, and Atharvaveda.<ref>{{cite book|last=Sarkar|first=Prabhat Ranjan|title=Shabda Cayanika Part 2|location=Kolkata|year=1996|publisher=Ananda Marga Publications|isbn=81-7252-102-2}}</ref> Metaphorically, the Lord is being described as a singer of ancient wisdom.|group="nb"}}
 So I want to sing a song for You.
-If you will grace me with your ear
+Should You choose to listen, then rest assured
-please be sure
+My throat is filled with only Your tunes.
-that my voice sings forth your melodies
+By singing for You, in my throat
-and by your hearing
+No corruption can endure.
-all her discords are dissolved.
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