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 Naught but dust in this world.
-Eager for existence, at dawn's crimson color,
+Ardent for existence, at dawn's crimson color,
 With heart's pollen
-He makes life fragrant, yes,
+He bestows fragrance, yes,
-He makes life fragrant.
+He bestows fragrance.
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