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 River water made to glitter,
-Ripples down to the sea.
+Ripples down toward the sea.
 By rows of illumined waves
-The seawater is not hindered,
+The seawater is unhindered,
-Not hindered, no, not hindered.
+It is not hindered, no, not hindered.
-Mind's peacock prances
+Beside the light there are rain clouds,
-at the gathering of dark clouds
+On seeing that, mind's peacock prances.
-in the shimmering light of the sky.
+Clanging in the cadence of dance,
+Allegro sounds my [[:wikipedia:ektara]].
-The onestringed ekatara
+With one mind drones my ektara,
-rings out
+My one-stringed lute, oh, my ektara.
-in rapid rhythm
-keeping pace with a resonance divine,
-and with such undivided mind
-shall i realise
-Your onelined melody.
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