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 Coated with greenery are the plants embellished;
 Filled with honeyscent are the blooms encouraged.
-With heartfragrance and spiritsong,
+With heartfragrance and with spiritsong,
-Joy rains down on earth in a nectar cascade.
+Joy rains down on earth with shower of nectar.
-and in your eternal game of divine melodies
+With the melody of songs is Your liila played out;
-and cadence of ecstatic dance
+With the rhythm of dance does Your sweetness spout.
-You weave your formless beauty
+In the ocean of ambrosia, brimming with love,
-through all her forms.
+You've let loose the unbodied stream.
-You flood her with an ocean of love
-and the nectar of life's sweetness./
-The ocean of your love
-abounds in bliss.
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