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 Tell me, tell me, tell me please.
-Now, in forests and hills, many flowers,
+Now, in forests and hills, a host of flowers,
-Have been moved to dance, passing time.
+Have been moved to dance, passing their time.
 Today, my mind wants not to go indoors.
-Oh, who is this magician that's arrived?
+Oh, who is the magician that has arrived?
 I've braided my hair with [[:wikipedia:Neolamarckia cadamba|kadamba blossoms]];