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 On a stormy night You came
 Amid the sound of thunder.
-Lightning falling with torrential rain,
+Lightning falling with pouring rain,
-You war cry spread around the world.
+Your war cry spread across the earth.
-The weighty mountain of corruption,
+Weighty mountains of corruption,
-Withstood not the impact of Your stream.
+Stood not the impact of Your stream.
 Those who blacked out earth's effulgence,
 They were washed away somewhere.
-who created walls of separation amongst human beings,
+Fomenting splits among human beings,
-who battered tender hearts.
+Tender hearts they did impair.
-They polluted the fresh breeze with sin,
+Friendly winds they poisoned with their sin,
-but now they have vanished.
+But they were expelled elsewhere.
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