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-If you don't come lord
+After You don't come,
-I will not speak to you.
+I won't say a word.
+I call You all the time,
+Not getting Your reply.
-I call you always
+Only Your sweet smile,
-but i never get any response from you.
+That's what I like to see.
+Had I received Your touch but brief,
+I would have pledged my everything.
-I love so much to see your sweet smiling face.
+A love steeped in honey,
+Dreamy but ringed by delusion...
-Just your momentary touch
+Within that drunken stupor,
-and i'll surrender my all unto you.
+There I'd ever be free.
-Your sweet love is as blissful as a beautiful dream.
-In that joyous state of intoxication
-I wish ever to exist.
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