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 Humming like a honeybee.
 You knocked on the door of my heart
-To awaken a conscious reception.
+To awaken only conscious reception.
-You entrance me
+The beauty of Your ruby lips,
-with your rosy lips
+Alluring with the hue of morning sun,
-dyed crimson like the radiant dawn.
+And Your stirring lyric craftsmanship
+Raise a storm on recall's painted canvas.
-Your lithe, swift rhythms
+Your broad smile and tender touch
-arouse a swirling memory of joy.
+Bring moisture to a heart that's dry.
+Your glance, bewitching to the eye,
-Your blissful smile and sweet caress
+Charm and beauty full, it's the breath of life.
-render soft and tender
-my arid heart.
-Your bewitching gaze
-overpowers my life with joy.
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