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 Let's go forward as one.
-When together we live,
+When united we live,
 There's no one to fear.
-When together we dine,
+When united we dine,
 Together we shine.
-United in joy and grief,
+Sharing both joy and grief,
-We're steady in our ideal.
+We are steady in our ideal.
-When brothers fall apart, strength is undermined.
+When brothers are estranged,
-When sisters also fall apart, families lose happiness.
+Their strength gets impaired.
-We will all live together,
+When sisters fall into quarrel,
-buoyant with happpiness.
+In the home, happiness won't dwell.
+United we will remain,
+And bliss will pervade.
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