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 By Your own hand, my lamp You have kindled.
-Verdant beauty returns to an arid desert.
+Greenery came again to an arid wilderness;
-An emaciated river swells with floodtide.
+A trickling stream was brought to spate.
-My shattered heart, at your tender touch,
+In song and dance, my broken heart found grace;
-Now rejoices in vibrant song and dance.
+You've applied a tender caress.
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