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-Into any mean action, mind I won't let descend;
+Into any action mean, mind I won't let it sink;
-No, no, no, I won't let it descend.
+No, no, no, I won't let it sink.
 I'll seat mind in meditation's splendor;
 I'll build a new world order.
-Earth and heaven await me
+Relying on me only, earth and heaven,
-With bated breath and ardent longing.
+They wait with bated breath.
-Their hopes will be fulfilled.
+Consummated are their hopes;
-I will set free the fountain of life.
+Life's fountain, I will make it flow.
-Removing tears, I will bring smiles.
+Wiping away the tears, smiles I will bring;
-Crying will go away; flutes will play.
+Weeping will go away, and flutes will play.
-To this earth, prosperity will come.
+Upon this earth will come good days;
-There will be no tales about the misery or oppression of anyone.
+Grief, suffering, and hardship won't remain.
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