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 Often I have loved, and often I have torn illusion.
 Many games I have played, as I have gone toward Thee;
-Always moving, my world, with dust it goes on mingling.
+Always moving, the world, with dust it goes on mingling.
-Yet, absent You, this dusty earth does not exist;
+And yet this dusty earth, without You it does not exist.
-To Your rhythm, it drifts ever toward heaven.
+In Your rhythm it lives; immortally it ever drifts.
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