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-Lord, Your property I consign to Thee;
+Your object I've consigned to Thee;
-Onto Your lap, Your own receive.
+Onto Your lap, Lord, please receive.
-Tearfully, I entrust; mournfully, I endure;
+Tearfully have I entrusted, mournfully endured;
-My solace is that You accepted what is Yours.
+My only solace is that You're the One Who took.
-Those who have come, they all remain,
+Those who had come, they've all remained;
-Within eternity, everyone is now awake.
+Within the Great Beyond, all are awake.
-Still, we always feel bereaved;
+Yet, constantly we feel bereaved;
-Forgetting You, Lord, we worry and weep.
+We fret and weep, oh Lord, having forgotten Thee.
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