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-I offer my life at Your feet.
+My life I would submit only at Your feet.
-Come dwell in my heart in raiment ever-new,
+Come and stay within my heart in new apparel daily;
-So I may saturate my life with remembering You.
+Thus, my life I would make full, contemplating You only.
-Come stay with me in song and dance, closer and closer,
+Come and stay in song and dance, more and more near;
-So I may occupy my life with welcoming You.
+Thus, my life I would entrust, entertaining You only.
-From tune to tune You transport me far away,
+From melody to melody, far away You've carried me;
-So I may dedicate my life to thinking about You.
+Thus, my life I would invest, considering You only.
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