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 | <poem>
 By the touch of Your dream,
-My life gained new dynamism.
+My life has got a fresh vitality.
+With hope my song resounds,
+With lyrics the notes vibrate now...
+My love has passed beyond all bounds.
-My song echoes hope;
+Dabbed with the magic of Your dream,
-My melody beats out the words:
+Heart's core was filled with honey.
-Love is limitless.
+In my tune the beat's exuberant,
+In my bloom the scent, ecstatic...
-Under the spell of Your dream,
+One gone astray discovered the polestar.
-My heart was filled with sweetness.
-Amid tunes surging with rhythm,
-Amid blooms frantic with fragrance,
-One who was lost found the polestar.
 Glazed with the sweetness of Your dream,
-The world has got new momentum.
+The world's received a speed-stream.
+On every side the light is bright;
-In all directions the light is dazzling;
+All I see, it just feels right.
-Whatever I see, it bodes well.
+Particles and atoms have been energized;
-All atoms and molecules are animated;
+And predilections, they've been satisfied...
-My finest feelings are satiated—
+The Earth became full of delight.
-Earth is full of bliss.
 </poem>
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